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Do you love me?
Or do you not?
you told me once, but i forgot.
So tell me now, and tell me true, so I can say that I love you.
Of all the guys I've ever met, you're the one, I won't forget.
And if I die before you do, I go to heaven and wait for you.


From the moment I saw you i knew this was true
So damn beautiful my eyes fixated on you.
I wanted to hug you, hold you so tight,
I wanted to tell you this feels so right.
Now i have a voice, my feelings out loud,
A smile on my face so happy and proud.
A girl with a dream and a dream come true,
A girl who has found the one, the one is you!


When I first saw you I was afraid to meet you,
When I first met you i was afraid to kiss you,
When I first kissed you I was afraid to love you,
and now that i love you i am afraid to loose you.


Love is like a river, or maybe a deep blue sea.
Love flows on forever, always and endlessly.
Love is something special, something you can't touch or see.
Love is amazing, this thing I feel for you and you for me.


I'm not afraid of death,
I'm not afraid of dying.
I'm not afraid of heartbreak
and I'm not afraid of crying.
The only thing I fear of ever really comming true,
is living this fearless life without you.


You're the first thing i think of each morning when i rise.
You're the last thing i think of each night when i close my eyes.
You're in each thought, i have and every breath i take.
My feelings are growing stronger with every move i make.
I want to prove i love you, but thats the hardest part.
If i tell you a secret, could it lead to a new start?
I have made up some love poems that maybe you can relate to with the person you like <3
some of these poems realate to the person i like ?
so read them tell me what you think!
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Dashieandluna Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2015  New member Student Artist
I am such a big fan maybbe if you could check out my poems it would be a dream come trueChiyo Shy Icon Um 
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Meg-Ex Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2015  New member
its nice!

-Meg
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Reinarosalina Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2014  Hobbyist
This is beautiful hermoso!!! :-) :-) :-) I got one so far on my page but in Spanish maybe I'll translate it???
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pooh706 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2014
I wrote something similar to this but in the complete opposite context I called it "first love"  I think its on my deviant art page.
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pooh706 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2014
I can completly realte to this poem more than I wish I could.  I have written a few poems realting to personal fellings as well. I find that they come out better than any poem that is just free flowing or for the fun of it.
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iSebqc Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2014
Beautifull
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harunatu Featured By Owner May 30, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
I love your poem it's beautifull really I just love it Lovely Shoujo (Heart for you) [V3] Lovely Shoujo (Heart for you) [V3] Lovely Shoujo (Heart for you) [V3] Lovely Shoujo (Heart for you) [V3] Lovely Shoujo (Heart for you) [V3] Lovely Shoujo (Heart for you) [V3] Lovely Shoujo (Heart for you) [V3] 
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JadeDragon1 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I loves ur poem and is very relate ableCryhappytearsplz 
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Mochimo-Suigetsu Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014  Student General Artist
I really like them :)
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prestosauce Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is breathtakingly beautiful... I feel like I'm in love... but it is indeed difficult to explain how it feels... 
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xXUnforgivinKingXx Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I love it, absolutely beautiful. Thanks for sharing this with us. Reminds me not only of who I love, but of people who used to love me.  
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Stranger-lelluiah Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013
Oh my word, your poem is so relate able. Thank you
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JohnK222 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013
This is wonderfully written, and it rhymes so well and all! :-)
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InFAKtedMAshRUm Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013
nice!
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earllison Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I love it!! x
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MsAngelus22 Featured By Owner May 9, 2013
Beautifully written <3
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blackwolf5496 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
beautiful<3 I don't know how but u managed to capture my feelings for my love even though I haven't known him for very long
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Mad--Sparrow Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013
These are the most beautiful words I have ever heard.
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Chaosgirl631 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist
It made me cry it sooooooooooooo pretty!!

;7 * sniff* ok ok it good

Great job it is amazing !!
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taichitwo Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
really beautiful words .
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tiziano317 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Really nice!!!
:tears:
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Karmaslove Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
this is verry well written its left me speachless...i could easily see this as someones wedding vows ...
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sunnyraina4 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Oh my goodness!! THIS IS AMAZING! :faint:
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jenkinson94 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012
What a lovely poem. I cried when I read this poem. It reminded me of my ex boyfriend who I skill love
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AriaApocalypse1727 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Reading this poem brought me to tears...I can relate so much to it and it's the most beautiful love poem i have read yet,I'm quite jealous(: You're an excellent poet and some day I hope to be as good as you. Keep up the impeccable work!
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Talmenar Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
totally..... except that I met this person when I was like seven, so at first I could really care less about him. but the more and more I spend time with him, the more I realize what a great guy he really is!
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Chibi-Momoro Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Is it okay if i post this on my journal?
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Marsiline16 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2012
i really love this one...x3
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Lovlyday Featured By Owner May 8, 2012
Love is lak de sea. It's uh movin' thing, but still and all, it takes its shape from de shore it meets, and it's different with every shore" - Their eyes were Watching God, Zora Neale Hurston
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JayEff97 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2012  Student General Artist
I wish she feels the same as I do.
When I read her this tomorrow I wish she knew,
That I love her so much as she loved me too.
Why, you ask? I don't have a clue.
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Dragonair13 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so much.. I've been wanting to tell my crush how much I love him this Valentine's, but I can't summon up the courage.. I think I'll try to tell him through writing, because I'm to ashamed to say through words. I hope he understands..
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happykt Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
AHHHHHH!!!! so true
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Xiomara25 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
my boyfriend and i love it :)
it the only poem he likes out of a hundred i've read :P
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melxrumple Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2011
Aren't some of these parts in an already-made poem?!?!?! :/
"Do you love me?
Or do you not?
you told me once, but i forgot.
So tell me now, and tell me true, so I can say that I love you.
Of all the guys I've ever met, you're the one, I won't forget.
And if I die before you do, I go to heaven and wait for you. "
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Mycrazyanimelover Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2011  Student Photographer
:'D its beautiful! I can't relate this to someone i like =P
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absolutely love it. <3
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anushjan Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2011
love it love it
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Johhy55 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2011
Sweet poem!
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KaoticRogue Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2011  Student Digital Artist
It's so beautiful x3
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Loks7 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2011  Student Writer
I love it, but please do not copy and paste make your words :) =)
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HarleyDavidson1 Featured By Owner May 21, 2011
this is amazing, its so true and flows with ease, its also very easy to read.
i love it!!!! !!!! your very good!
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dragongirl7777777 Featured By Owner May 15, 2011
its is sooo amazing i love to right poems but im no were near as good as you this is verry nice hehe love it!!! keep it up!
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MagellinaFluffQueen Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2011
"If I die before you do I'll go to Heaven and wait for you." That's really lovely.
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lovinhym4life Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2011
all i can say is wow. i have been writing poetry since i was seven and consider myself to have a talent but you obviously have way more of a talent . keep up the amazing work.
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InsaneMetal Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2011
Damn I almost cried reading this. Very well done! I love it!
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countrygirl29108 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2011
amazingly beutiful
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ohyescesc Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Hi you should join our group called love for the lovers! we'd love to see your poetry in our galleries. Check out the poetry contest and glance over the rules. Hope you join! [link]
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MissMarissa1998 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2011
I love it.
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Animegeekmak Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2011
I love these!:) Thank you so much for putting these up!
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bulinemov Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you so much! I used one and played it on my guitar to my love for Valentines day :heart: :hug:
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