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June 23, 2006
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Do you love me?
Or do you not?
you told me once, but i forgot.
So tell me now, and tell me true, so I can say that I love you.
Of all the guys I've ever met, you're the one, I won't forget.
And if I die before you do, I go to heaven and wait for you.

From the moment I saw you i knew this was true
So damn beautiful my eyes fixated on you.
I wanted to hug you, hold you so tight,
I wanted to tell you this feels so right.
Now i have a voice, my feelings out loud,
A smile on my face so happy and proud.
A girl with a dream and a dream come true,
A girl who has found the one, the one is you!

When I first saw you I was afraid to meet you,
When I first met you i was afraid to kiss you,
When I first kissed you I was afraid to love you,
and now that i love you i am afraid to loose you.

Love is like a river, or maybe a deep blue sea.
Love flows on forever, always and endlessly.
Love is something special, something you can't touch or see.
Love is amazing, this thing I feel for you and you for me.

I'm not afraid of death,
I'm not afraid of dying.
I'm not afraid of heartbreak
and I'm not afraid of crying.
The only thing I fear of ever really comming true,
is living this fearless life without you.

You're the first thing i think of each morning when i rise.
You're the last thing i think of each night when i close my eyes.
You're in each thought, i have and every breath i take.
My feelings are growing stronger with every move i make.
I want to prove i love you, but thats the hardest part.
If i tell you a secret, could it lead to a new start?
I have made up some love poems that maybe you can relate to with the person you like <3
some of these poems realate to the person i like ?
so read them tell me what you think!
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Reinarosalina Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2014  New member Hobbyist
This is beautiful hermoso!!! :-) :-) :-) I got one so far on my page but in Spanish maybe I'll translate it???
pooh706 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2014
I wrote something similar to this but in the complete opposite context I called it "first love"  I think its on my deviant art page.
pooh706 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2014
I can completly realte to this poem more than I wish I could.  I have written a few poems realting to personal fellings as well. I find that they come out better than any poem that is just free flowing or for the fun of it.
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harunatu Featured By Owner May 30, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
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JadeDragon1 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I loves ur poem and is very relate ableCryhappytearsplz 
Mochimo-Suigetsu Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014  Student General Artist
I really like them :)
prestosauce Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is breathtakingly beautiful... I feel like I'm in love... but it is indeed difficult to explain how it feels... 
xXUnforgivinKingXx Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I love it, absolutely beautiful. Thanks for sharing this with us. Reminds me not only of who I love, but of people who used to love me.  
Stranger-lelluiah Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013
Oh my word, your poem is so relate able. Thank you
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